-the filming was successful with different camera movements.
-the narrative is clear.
-the music fitted well with the filming creating suspense.
-the opening had a sense of enigma.
She then gave points on which we should improve:
-We need to add a voice over to help improve the narrative.
-Decrease the brightness of the colours during the park scene.
-Add sound effects of guns per ripping the war photos to imply the woman had experienced trauma.
- Adding the toy into filming to tie with our film poster and final shot with the opening.
We have taken these points on board and will continue to work on our film to make it the most realistic.
In class this week, you sought feedback from peers. Your group then set to work to show how you responded to the feedback. You are working on a Prezi presenting your responses to feedback. Your group has organized the material for your Prezi clearly. Your group's approach to feedback was constructive and demonstrated articulate reflection.
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